During our writing meeting, Olivia and I talked about my goals essay, the positives about it, and things that maybe I could improve. She read my essay one paragraph at a time and said that most of it was actually really well written. Some things that she told me that I could possibly improve was when I talked about wanting to be able to express my creativity. She told me that I could talk about examples of how my classes or extracurricular activities could fulfill that need for creativity, or even talk about the lack of it due to the pandemic. Other than that, she suggested that I explain what cultural citizenship is in more detail to make it easier for the reader if they didn’t know what that meant.